Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say it is useful only for entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some would argue that the best method to become successful in life is to gain a
university
degree
, while others say that getting a
job
immediately after secondary
education
is the right choice.
Although
working right after high
school
gains more
experience
, I believe that having a
university
degree
places people ahead of other people. On the one hand, students who work immediately after high
school
have more
experience
in a particular field.
This
is to say that after completing secondary
education
, students who start working get more time to work, and they gain more
experience
in that particular industry.
As a result
,
such
people might even get a high salary in the future.
For example
, my elder brother started
working right
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working, right
out of high
school
in 2011, and now he is highly paid.
However
, in
this
modern era, every
job
description mentions a particular
degree
which a student should gain to get a
job
, so I believe getting tertiary
education
is mandatory for getting employed.
On the other hand
, it is thought
that
Suggestion
that a university degree
university
degree
holders are ahead of other people who do not have any
degree
.
In other words
, people having
tertiary
Suggestion
a tertiary education
education
have both theoretical and practical skills which help them to excel after getting a
job
.
Initially
, they might be underpaid, but with
such
skills and knowledge, they will be paid highly during later stages of their career.
For instance
, in a recent survey conducted by the Employment Board of India, it was revealed that people who are having a
university
degree
are paid highly. I believe
such
qualifications are necessary because even countries like Canada and America ask for a
university
degree
for all immigrants who wish to work in these countries. In conclusion,
although
working immediately after high
school
gains more
experience
, I believe people having a
university
degree
are ahead of others in terms of skills and expertise.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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