Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. What might be the cases? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?
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a higher chance
beacuse
they can gain all of the for the reason that; on account of
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about afflicted with or marked by anxious uneasiness or trouble or grief
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(law) someone who owns (is legal possessor of) a business
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invole
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involves
involve
invoke
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risks and greater than normal in degree or intensity or amount
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return. It is cause to move by striking
hit
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highest
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