Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. What might be the cases? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?

In these days more
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These days more
and more people
decised
recognizable; marked
decided
to run the
business
themselfs
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
instead
of working for others. In
this
case that
although
the plenty of emerging industries were developed by
entreprenurs
someone who organizes a business venture and assumes the risk for it
entrepreneurs
entrepreneur
the market still short-handed.
In
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At
On
From
my point
this
phenomenon has both merits and demerits effect of
this
.
Currenly
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Currently
, some people tend to
strat
take the first step or steps in carrying out an action
start
stray
up the
business
because it has
higher chance
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a higher chance
to earn money
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
they can gain all of the
profits which
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profits, which
maent
one of the twelve divisions of the calendar year
month
meant
mint
is they do not need to share any money with other people.
Another
Suggestion
Other
reasons why they can decide the work-
time so
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time, so
that do not need to
warried
afflicted with or marked by anxious uneasiness or trouble or grief
worried
about
weke
be awake, be alert, be there
wake
weak
work
up early or
over work
use too much
overwork
. Most
inportant
of great significance or value
important
is that can decide all the policy and rule of the company because
this
is your own property.
Moreover
, the government
also provide
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also provides
various of loan to
entreprenurs
someone who organizes a business venture and assumes the risk for it
entrepreneurs
entrepreneur
who encourage people starting their own
business
.
On the other hand
, if you start up the
business
that
also
have some demerits of it. For
eamaple
more than enough in size or scope or capacity
ample
maple
, you will need to prepare a
figures
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figure
if fund to start the company. The fund
are
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is
a huge challenge for most of people unless you lend money from
bank
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the bank
a bank
banks
. In
this
situation, you must
guarantees
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guarantee
the succeed. Followed by
this
, the
ownner
(law) someone who owns (is legal possessor of) a business
owner
owners
do not have
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does not have
real
off time, they
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time off, they
have to care about the organizations and management. In
conclution
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
, start a own
business
is a big challenge which
invole
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involves
involve
invoke
hight
greater than normal in degree or intensity or amount
high
risks and
hight
cause to move by striking
hit
high
highest
return. It is
difficults
not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure
difficult
to set the
bell
round object that is hit or thrown or kicked in games
ball
rolling, but if you succeed meanwhile
that is
quite an accomplishment.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • autonomy
  • align
  • flexibility
  • work-life balance
  • productivity
  • advancements in technology
  • entrepreneurial spirit
  • financial rewards
  • constraints
  • employee benefits
  • administrative tasks
  • financial instability
  • job insecurity
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