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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the quantity of
waste
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products
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production
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of
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by
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three companies
labeled
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 A,
B
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 and
C
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 from 2000 to 2015. Units are measured in
tonnes
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.
Overall
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, one main element of
this
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 graph is that companies A and
C
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 had completely opposite trends. For the given
period
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,
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company
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Company
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 A decreased its
waste
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production
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 at a fairly steady rate
while
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company
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C
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 has constantly increased its amount of junk.
Company
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B
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 set itself apart with its
production
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 going up in the first 5 years before going down at a higher rate than
company
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 A.As mentioned above, companies A and
B
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 have dramatically cut
into
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the amount of
waste
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 they produce when compared to the beginning of the
period
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.
Company
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 A was the biggest
waste
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 producer of all in 2000 with 12
tonnes
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, but it has worked towards reducing constantly
this
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 number to reach about 8
tonnes
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. When looking closer at
company
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B
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, we see it started the
period
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 at 8
tonnes
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,
then
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 went up to 10
tonnes
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 in 2005 before experiencing an important drop and finished at 3
tonnes
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 in 2015.
Finally
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,
the
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company
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C
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 started the
period
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 with the lowest amount of
waste
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 at about 4
tonnes
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, but its
waste
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production
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 has grown up constantly to end at 10
tonnes
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 in 2015.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, production, b, c, tonnes, period, company with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • significant changes
  • increase
  • decrease
  • waste production
  • period
  • compare
  • analyze
  • main features
  • highlight
  • decline
  • rise
  • steady
  • variations
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