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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the quantity of
waste
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products
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production
of
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by
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three companies
labeled
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labelled
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 A,
B
 and
C
 from 2000 to 2015. Units are measured in
tonnes
.
Overall
, one main element of
this
 graph is that companies A and
C
 had completely opposite trends. For the given
period
,
company
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Company
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 A decreased its
waste
production
 at a fairly steady rate
while
company
C
 has constantly increased its amount of junk.
Company
B
 set itself apart with its
production
 going up in the first 5 years before going down at a higher rate than
company
 A.As mentioned above, companies A and
B
 have dramatically cut
into
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the amount of
waste
 they produce when compared to the beginning of the
period
.
Company
 A was the biggest
waste
 producer of all in 2000 with 12
tonnes
, but it has worked towards reducing constantly
this
 number to reach about 8
tonnes
. When looking closer at
company
B
, we see it started the
period
 at 8
tonnes
,
then
 went up to 10
tonnes
 in 2005 before experiencing an important drop and finished at 3
tonnes
 in 2015.
Finally
,
the
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company
C
 started the
period
 with the lowest amount of
waste
 at about 4
tonnes
, but its
waste
production
 has grown up constantly to end at 10
tonnes
 in 2015.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, production, b, c, tonnes, period, company with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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