Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The lifespan of people has been

gone

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going

up considerably when compared to past due to great developments and innovations in

healthcare

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health care

in our modern era and some people feel that the

retirement

age

should be increased.

Although

extending the working

age

could bring about some merits, I believe that there are far more inevitable concerns.

Initially

, raising workforce with myriad experienced staff would lead the economy of

company

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the company

companies

a company

to develop in any aspects. To clarify, a lot of developed states have applied

extension

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extensively

in working

age

and obtained

great increase

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a great increase

in their economy and status in the world. Ergo, the growth in

retirement

age

can give a chance to the old to spend more time on their

work station

a desktop digital computer that is conventionally considered to be more powerful than a microcomputer

workstation

and

this

endows them to gain financial independence. Foreseeing

this

, the young may be more motivated and impressed thanks to the desire of older people who sacrifice themselves for the company or country.

In other words

, these industrious older human beings may be the national icon for

start-ups

the act of setting in operation

startups

startups'

startup's

.

On the other hand

, increasing the

retirement

age

would cause discouragement amid the young and employees who are working hard so as to climb up in their career ladder since

large number

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a large number

of older people are holding top positions.

Thus

, as it is difficult to be employed in top positions

of

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in

the government, most successful entrepreneurs have commenced their respective business.

Furthermore

,

this

may cause in the increase of the redundancy rate in society as more youngsters face difficulties while finding a job. Another cardinal reason is that there are some tough professions which demand more strength and stamina and cause troubles to the old while working.

For example

, it is unfair to tell firefighters or policemen to work more. Yet, life after

retirement

means the respect for

this

type of people. To recapitulate,

although

increasing

retirement

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the retirement age

age

will benefit the old in various ways and decline their financial stress, it is highly suggested that governments should be cautious prior to choosing to apply

this

policy.