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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as sahara desserts or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists to visit such places?

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Over the
last
 few years, there has been a significant increase in the number of people travelling to uncommon places like Sahara desert or the Antarctic. Majorly they are driven by passion and fond of creating vivid memories. But at the same time,
such
 visits may turn
to
Suggestion
into
life
 threatening events as well. For a few people, travelling is a passion. To explore it, they opt to take isolated places for their visits.
Such
 journey allows them to make feel confident about themselves and give
sense
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a sense
 of achievement.
In addition
 to it, it is not a destination which
matters but
Accept comma addition
matters, but
 it is a journey which gives a lifelong memory to cherish. By choosing
such
 places, they create a memory which will never fade away.
Such
 creation may help later in
life
, allowing them to thrive more rather than just living a
life
. These kind of people are aware of all possible risk factors,
however
, they want to feel the adrenaline rush. And
hence
, they set out for
such
 difficult routes.
On the other hand
, taking
such
 journey can be very dangerous. Things may turn
up side
the highest or uppermost side of anything
upside
 down and everything can go beyond the plan. A Lot of travellers have lost their lives while trekking difficult mountains or rafting in turbulent rivers. Many adventures go beyond the expected plan and many go missing at
such
 locations
where
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
 no locals can provide much of
help
Suggestion
a help
. Under
such
 situations, government has to get involved and has to launch costly rescue operations. In conclusion, difficult destinations may pump a group of people high and offer them thrilling experience. But
such
 journeys may lead them to learn a lifelong
lessons
Suggestion
lesson
 in case they have to go in adverse situation and which may prove a
life
 threatening as well.

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