There is a problem in your street. Write a letter to the local town council explaining who you are, what the problem is and what you hope will be done about it.

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Sarah Roberts, and I am writing to you regarding a tree that fell down at Martin Street, York, on 4th March. For the reason of the

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we had many damages in our

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a tree that fell down, and it is been blocked the road. The episode happened on the right-hand side of the street. More specific in front of the house 508, Martin Street.

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the day that occurred the

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I called the fire department immediately, but have not had any success. I completely understand they are very busy,

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there are many issues all over the city.

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, it is been almost a week and the problem was not solved yet. I would be grateful if you could send the maintenance to remove the tree by the end of

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week. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sarah Roberts.

Thu Jan 30 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

153 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Local council, town hall, representative, official address
Infrastructure, amenities, public services
Road maintenance, potholes, resurfacing
Streetlight, illumination, lighting outage
Noise pollution, disturbance, decibel levels
Health hazards, safety concerns, risk assessment
Remedial action, corrective measures, enforcement
Communication, response, follow-up
Pertinent, urgent, pressing issue
Resolution, rectification, amelioration

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There is a problem in your street. Write a letter to the local town council explaining who you are, what the problem is and what you hope will be done about it.

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