Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However,television cannot replace the book as a learning tool which is why children are less well educated today .to what extent do you agree with that statement

In
this
modern era, children are involved more in
technology
like
television
, mobile phones and other visual aids,
instead
of books. Some people consider
this
as the root cause of increasing lack of moral values and education among youngsters. I
am partially agree
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partially agree
have partially agreed
with
this
statement, in the
further
paragraphs, I am going to discuss both the pros and cons, of both
technology
and books. Nowadays
,
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,
with the enhancement in devices people
temptu
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word more fascinating things that give the information and entertainment at the same time,
such
as,
television
and computers.
To
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With
the demand of time, schools
also
adaptations concept and have start smart classes.
Consequently
, children become
habitually
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a habit
habit
the habit
habits
of using these audiovisual equipments.
Moreover
, in today's time
television
is
the most cheaper
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the cheapest
source of education,
one
can easily avail knowledge about science
technology
and political activities. There are some special channels
also
available for
youngster
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youngsters
the youngster
such
as, Discovery, history TV 18, and Discovery
kids
a young person of either sex
Kids
. In contrary, the traditional way of teaching,
somehow have
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somehow, have
many benefits for students, by books.
books
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The books
Books
contain a lot of moral stories related to everyone's day to day life, in from the very beginning
one
tend to read them.
Further
, books arouse the breathing habit
that is
essential for child's overall development.
Furthermore
,
one
can become more concentrated by reading books. Even
,
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,
books are the lifelong source of knowledge,
one
has not
worry
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worried
about any kind of technical glitches. In conclusion, being a student of a literature, I am not going to deny the significance of both books and
technology
.
but
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But
somehow books teach us moral values and about social life more than
television
.I personally feel a kind of connectivity with
books but
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books, but
television
gives me knowledge about the whole world.
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