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As a result of electronic inventions such as the computer and television, people do less physical activity, and this is having a negative effect on their health

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Nowadays many
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Nowadays, many
 people spend less time taking
exercises
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exercises, therefore
therefore
 electronic inventions and there are some drawbacks on their health. It is undeniable that electronic inventions
has
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have
 both positive and negative effects on people. On the one hand electronic inventions and gadgets make people lazy.
Therefore it
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Therefore, it
 can lead to obesity.
For
example when
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example, when
 people have spare time they prefer using their gadgets to doing physical activities.
On the other hand
 gadgets,
such
 as mobile phone, dishwasher, vacuum cleaner makes our live easier. They help people to reduce the amount of physical work
as a
result people
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result, people
 have extra free time to do other things,
such
 as homework, cooking. In conclusion, I believe that electronic technologies can have both positive and negative influences on people.
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