Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is considered by some people that
music
is a key way to combine various cultures and person who having different ages. In my opinion,
it works as mediator and people become more friendly and Accept space
,
increase
their contact with whom having same interest.
To Begin
with, one important point is that music
is liked by all the age people and they like to hear it any place.Because it expands the frequency of communication between younger and older increase
. It creates a harmony between them as they have the same choice. For Example
, Indian Garba songs are well known in the entire world. A Person that lives outside India always eager to learn that Indian traditional dance if they know that you are Indian. In addition
to that, there are possibility that person can increase
their contact which helps them in later years of life.
Seondly
,
Accept space
,
music
work as stress reliever for all ages and cultural people.Most people use it; they want some refreshment from their work. Lastly
,
most adolescent likes to hear an English song and they follow that artists as well. So, they want to know all about their personal life, even if they belong to from different culture and want to attend their concert at any part of the world. Accept space
,
Therefore
, it has also
expanded the tourism sector of the nation which helps in overall growth of the world.
In conclusion, While music
is used by all ages people as it work as refreshment, positivity, knowledge of different cultures and increase
the contact of ones. Government should also
support musical events.Submitted by nidhinkhatri on
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