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Some people believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. Others, however, believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old.

#people #children #school #home #six #seven #years
Young children
have becoming
Suggestion
are becoming
have been becoming
were becoming
 lazy day by day in
this
 contemporary era;
therefore
, they avoid to attain
school
.
Although
 some people opine that children should
attained
Suggestion
attain
a
expresses position, direction or location, or point in time
at
school
everyday
Suggestion
every day
, while others believe that
school
 give
permission to children
Suggestion
children permission to
 stay at
hime
where you live at a particular time
home
 and play till they are six or seven years old. I completely agree with children must be
go
Suggestion
going
 to
school
 daily when they are young for several reasons, as describe in below paragraphs. At the onset, an
education
 is a need of an hour for every
children
Suggestion
child
 in
this
 modern time. Some parents
stric
rigidly accurate; allowing no deviation from a standard
strict
stick
strike
 for their child's
attaindance
the act of being present (at a meeting or event etc.)
attendance
 in the
school
.
First
 and foremost paramount reason is it creates a positive habit in the
childrens'
Suggestion
child's
children
 mind to go
school
 everyday. If students do not go to
school
 some time, it creates nasty impact on them
;
Accept space
;
as a result
, they can try to avoid to go
school
. According to my own experience, when I was studying in
first standard
Suggestion
the first standard
, I went to
school
 daily and I addicted to the
school
;
therefore
, I learned from that how to live with discipline in our life? On the flip side of
coin
Suggestion
the coin
, six to seven years is a perfect age of starting to take an
education
 and
this
 age creates all habits of our entire life. If students do not go to
school
, they are playing games at home and they will not
focused
Suggestion
focus
in
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on
 their academic career.
For example
, my friend, who is handsome, did not go to
school
 and played cricket when he is six
year
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years
 old;
therefore
, he is not
interesting
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interested
 in an
education
 recently. In conclusion, an
education
 is
important segment
Suggestion
an important segment
 in human's life.
This
 essay discussed why young children go to
school
 compulsory and the do not stay at home and play games. Children will get more profits from
attain
Suggestion
attaining
school
 regularly rather than bunk in
school
 in their primary
education
 level.
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