Some people claim that it is acceptable to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human beings, while others argue that it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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ethical considerations
moral dilemma
animal rights
alternative methods
computer modeling
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stringent regulations
minimization of suffering
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