Some people say that parents have the most important role in a child's development. However others argue that other things like television or friends have the most significant influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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a unit of length equal to one twelfth of a foot

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development in their upcoming future. Well

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in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go

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one to teach

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a very young child (birth to 1 year) who has not yet begun to walk or talk

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about the disciplinary values

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norm and respect elders

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children are not taught with these things they won't learn basic things as home is the

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place to learn. Talking about the

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the little one's development

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motivational speech

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about basic developmental things they will learn good things.

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likely but not certain to be or become true or real

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plants early through good vibes they will grow instantly with good results.

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talking through both aspects

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keen view to both aspects plays the important

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development if it

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in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go

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grown up in a proper way.