People can eat a wide variety of food that can be grown from other areas. As a results, people eat more food produced in other regions than local food. Do you think the advantage of this tend outweigh the disadvantage?

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a growing trend toward buying imported

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rather than

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certainly a contentious one. My view is that the advantage outweighs the disadvantage. Since imported foods are always checked and only the best products end up on our market, those foods always have good quality. Indeed, if a supplier tries to sell low-quality products, it will sooner or later be rejected. Another guarantee that we eat good-quality

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is the fact that the reputation of imported company is

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stake. If they do not get good feedback from consumers, they will do everything to change the supplier and start offering the foods people will enjoy eating. By buying imported

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in the long run, we can see that we can save money. When a certain

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true that some local traditional

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may receive bad influence due to the invasion of foreign

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makers are losing their market to giant

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companies, and the traditional

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fading eventually. But still, the cons are far greater. In sum,

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from oversea bring a lot of

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People can eat a wide variety of food that can be grown from other areas. As a results, people eat more food produced in other regions than local food. Do you think the advantage of this tend outweigh the disadvantage?

Fully explain your ideas

Today, many people aim to achieve a balance between work and other parts of their life, but few of them can achieve it. What are the problems in trying it? What measures can be taken to solve this problem?

Some think schools should rewards students who have the best academic results, while others think it’s more important to reward students who achieve other types of success (such as sports, music, and good behaviour). Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Computers are becoming an essential part of education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people feel that the private lives of celebrities should not be openly shared by the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words.