Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us want to be and to look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Advertising is a creative industry and a key part of modern business notwithstanding, some people argue that advertising influences the personal features of a man by standardizing a model that everyone wants to become;

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, there is no difference among individuals in society. I strongly disagree with

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statement for some reasons below.

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, different person has totally different tastes about

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style,

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, or item.

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one

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fashion

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may be encouraged but in

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look, there could be several versions.

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, short hair is a

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in many fashion

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magazines, but

still, a woman can choose different styles

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as black short hair, red curly

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, or straight bob hair. The private characteristics of a person make the same

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specially and individuals choose the suitable style to reflect himself.

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, advertisement accesses customer directly so that it brings everyone more choices. Without advertising we would have less choice by

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information of the products. It is common that every line of a product has its own advertisement to bring it quickly to customers. For

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as a watch, Casio which is a watch company has several advertisements for G-shock model for sporty people, dedication leather style for ladies and so on. Another example for sport shoes, people can decide which shoes fit them by watching advertisements of Nike, Skechers, New Balance. To sum up, despite there exist some opinions about the identical effect of advertising on

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of a man, I strongly believe that advertising could not make the difference of individuals disappear.

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, it brings human more choices and boosts various styles of a man.

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