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Some people think that social skills are as important as academic qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #skills #qualifications
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Dear John, I’m very happy to know that you will come to my
apartment
 to live during the time I go travel with my family. We are best friend and I hope that my little
apartment
 will be the good place for you when you come to Hochiminh City. Because when you arrive here, I’ll not at home, so I’m writing
this
 email to give you more details for you about my
apartment
 and some advices for you when you are in Hochiminh city.
First
, I will give the key for the
neighbor
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbour
next
 to my room, his name is David and his room number is A15-07 and phone number: 0976888432. I will
also
 tell him that you will come here. When you arrive to my house, please call him before that 30 minutes so he can arrange his time and give it to you.
Second
, you are free to use my
apartment
 and sleep anywhere you want. I’ve prepared the shampoo that I know you like it for you. If you want to cook, you can turn on the electric power of the kitchen behind the main door. You can use television, air-condition and everything you want.
Finally
, I recommend you can go somewhere in Ho Chi Minh City. If you want to know more about the history of
this
 city, you can go to
Independent
Suggestion
Independence
 House in District 1. And
also
 in district 1, you
also
 can find the delicious food, park and a lot of interesting things nearby. Well, hope that you will enjoy your time in Ho Chi Minh city. Anything you want me to help, feel free to text or call me. Your best friend. Thai Tran.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social skills
  • academic qualifications
  • interpersonal communication
  • teamwork
  • emotional intelligence
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving
  • leadership
  • career advancement
  • job interviews
  • networking
  • soft skills
  • self-awareness
  • adaptability
  • collaboration
  • creativity
  • analytical skills
  • educational system
  • real-world situations
  • economic success
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