A year ago, you lent your favourite book to a friend who you thought would enjoy it. Unfortunately, your friend has forgotten to return it. The book has sentimental value to you as it had been presented by your grandmother. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: ask how he or she is doing remind him / her about the book explain why you need it back

Dear Kate, How are you& I hope you are joyful and healthy. It's been a while since we have met. I would like to know how you all are doing. Do you still live in London? Please write me back when you are planning to go to Riga. A week ago my boyfriend was in a movie at the cinema without me because I worked. He watched "Fifty Shades of Grey" and I remembered that I gave to you a book with the same name. I really enjoyed
this
book and I hope you enjoyed it too.
This
book is really precious to me as my best friend owned it and gave it to me on
birthday
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my birthday
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. If you are still reading it, please send it to me by postal service when you are done. I wish we can meet each other as soon as possible. With lots of love and warm wishes, Polina.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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