Topic: You recently visited a restaurant and found that the food was cold and the service was slow. Write a letter to the manager. Cues: Describe the problems you experienced. Explain how these problems affected you. Suggest what action you would like the restaurant to take.

Dear Manager, I hope you are well. I am writing to express my concern regarding a recent visit to your

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. The main problem was that the food

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which was served

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did not meet the standards .

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, a rice and a lentil soup dish were not at the optimum temperature.

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caused disappointment

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eating.

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, the service at the

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was very slow, which made me wait longer than expected.

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experience was disappointing, and I could not enjoy the food as planned. I visited the place with my family to celebrate my mother's birthday , but your service ruined everything. If these issues are not corrected, future guests may feel dissatisfied as well. I would appreciate it if the

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could improve . To resolve these problems, I suggest training the staff properly and checking the food before serving it to customers. Could you

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ensure that service times in the

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are faster? Implementing these measures would enhance visitors' satisfaction. Thank you for your attention, and I look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Avi Patel

avipatel9831

Aug 14, 2025

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Shows how the issue hit a family event.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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186 words

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