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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

#countries #people #rent #homes #home
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Regarding the country, people need to have a
place
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 to live, it is an essential human c
ontition
a state at a particular time
condition
to feel secure and protected;
however
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, renting or buying a
place
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 to live depends on the country, city or n
eiborhood
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
neighbourhoods
you choose. On the one hand, people that
rent
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 a
house
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 or an apartment rather than buying it, can invest their
money
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 and earn certain a
mout
a quantity of money
amount
that can help them p
aying
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pay
the monthly
rent
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.
Furthermore
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, they are not attached to a certain
place
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, they can move to another city or county without thinking about renting or m
antainig
keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"
maintaining
their
property
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.
On the other hand
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, in some c
ases people
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cases, people
are not allowed to make changes i
nside
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in
the
property
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, and there will b
e alwayse a sense
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always be a sense
be always a sense
of insecurity because the owner can decide to not renovate the contract a
ny time.
at whatever time; whenever
anytime
 W
ereas
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Whereas
buying a
house
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 or floor can be a good investment;
first
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, they can
rent
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 the h
ole
all of something including all its component elements or parts
whole
property
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 or just a room and make
money
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 out of it.
Second
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, normally having a
property
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 is a good investment, if the housing market has a boom or if they need
money
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, selling their
property
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 can be a good solution and sometimes they c
on
able to
can
earn more
money
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 than the one they spent.
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, people can make as m
uch
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many
changes as they want. But, s
ome times
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
the cost of m
antainance
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
can be very high and v
asrious
of many different kinds purposefully arranged but lacking any uniformity
various
countries have a
nualy
and nothing more
only
annual
or monthly tax for earning a
house
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. Overall, in some places like the county side is better to buy a
house
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 because the cost is lower as well as the taxes. While living in a big city is better to
rent
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 do t
o
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with
the high prices and costs of living and people normally to move from one
place
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 to another depending on their work or school.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial commitment
  • down payment
  • initial costs
  • allocate resources
  • maintenance costs
  • mobility
  • relocate
  • market fluctuations
  • property value
  • building equity
  • appreciate in value
  • asset
  • personalization
  • restrictions
  • rental increases
  • lease renewal
  • financial instability
  • housing budgets
  • long-term security
  • landlord
  • lease agreement
  • equity
  • substantial
  • property ownership
  • property market
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