Some pople think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work intead of bering put behind bars. To what extend do you agree?

In most countries prisoners have the right reintegrate to
society
after getting out of prison, the problem is that they don’t
recibe
get something; come into possession of
receive
cualify education
Suggestion
a qualified education
qualified education
qualify education
an guidance to really
maske
engage in
make
it happened. Having inmates
lockeout
a management action resisting employee's demands; employees are barred from entering the workplace until they agree to terms
lockout
locked
whithout
in absence of
without
doing something productive it do not
beneficiate
Suggestion
benefit
beneficial
beneficent
the
communitys
Suggestion
community's
community
economy, nor the prisoner’s
readaptation
a written work (as a novel) that has been recast in a new form
adaptation
process. If
victimazers
a person who victimizes others
victimizers
have the
oportunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
opportunities
to contribute to their
society
by making non-profit
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
the will be able to have a better
readaptation
a written work (as a novel) that has been recast in a new form
adaptation
process and the government will not spend money by
highering
engage or hire for work
hiring
people to do the
work
.
Furthermore
, prisoners can have a good
oportunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
opportunities
to learn new skills and have a mental
brake
some abrupt occurrence that interrupts an ongoing activity
break
from the agonizing situation they might be living.
In contrast
, forcing inmates to do free
work
can be
use
Suggestion
used
to violate their human rights,
that is
, there is a sharp line between unpaid community
work
and force
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
or
explotation
the act of making some area of land or water more profitable or productive or useful
exploitation
.
Moreover
, it is
essencial
absolutely necessary; vitally necessary
essential
to make a good policy regarding nonprofit
work
focusing on the benefits that the
society
will have as well as the inmate.
Finally
, the government has to start looking for the reasons people end in prison, because it may have to do with the country’s administration and lack of
oportunities
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
opportunity
. Overall, unpaid community
work
has more benefits than disadvantages, so I strongly agree with
this
policy.
Nevertheless
, the
proyect
a clergyman in Christian churches who has the authority to perform or administer various religious rites; one of the Holy Orders
priest
project
priests
shall considerate
essencial
absolutely necessary; vitally necessary
essential
human rights and its
paradigma
systematic arrangement of all the inflected forms of a word
paradigm
has to
focuse
the concentration of attention or energy on something
focus
on the
bernefit
financial assistance in time of need
benefit
benefits
that the community will
recibe
get something; come into possession of
receive
, as well as the
inmate’s
Suggestion
inmate
reintegration to
society
and the
work
field.
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