Write a letter to the hotel manager to inform you are coming with a group of people to have a business meeting at his hotel. - Introduce yourself and the group. - Tell about the business meeting. - Inform if accommodation is necessary.

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Dear esteemed Manager, I, Mandeep Kaur; an employee at a well-reputed organisation renowned as the World of Technology in Toronto, am writing

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letter to inform you that I am visiting and staying at your hotel with my team of ten in

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. I have been working as a

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manager with

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organisation since 2010, and we recently awarded a

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with the Vancouver-based IT company known as Tech Mahindra. I and my other ten team members have been invited to discuss in detail our new

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by the CEO of Tech Mahindra because we all are working together on

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project

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. The official meeting will take place at the headquarters of Tech Mahindra in downtown Vancouver on

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5th and 6th in the afternoon;

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, we are planning to stay at your hotel from

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4th until

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7th. Our flight will land in the evening on

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4th and we will check in around 4:00 pm

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departure is on

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7th at noon, so we will check out around 10:30 am. We are seeking for an accommodation for these three days. We would prefer a private room with sharing bathroom and kitchen. I would appreciate it if you could let us know the availability of ten rooms on the above-specified dates. I am looking forward to your prompt response. Yours sincerely, Sandeep Kaur

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Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure each paragraph presents a single clear idea or point to strengthen paragraph cohesion and coherence.

Coherence and Cohesion

Use a variety of linking words and phrases to show connections between ideas more explicitly, enhancing cohesion.

Task Achievement

Be specific about what you are requesting in terms of accommodation to ensure all parts of the task are adequately covered.

Task Achievement

Maintain a consistent formal tone throughout the letter, and you may want to use titles such as 'Mr./Ms. Manager' if the name is unknown to increase the suitability of the writing tone for the task.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

227 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Accommodation
Attendees
Agenda
Seating arrangements
Technical equipment
Logistical needs
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Package deal
Dietary restrictions
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