The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some individuals believe that raising the cost of
fuel
is the most effective method to solving world's environmental problems. While I accept that
this
policy is good to some extent, I believe it is not the best because there are much better measure to reduce environmental issues.
it
Suggestion
It
might be a good idea to increase the price of
fuel
such
as coal, petrol and gas because of some reasons.
Firstly
, by making it more costly to purchase
fuel
, government can deter people from using personal vehicles.
For example
, if gasoline is more expensive, people will start using public transport rather than driving a car or riding a motorbike, resulting in a reduction of CO2 emissions, which is responsible for global warming and climate change.
Secondly
, the decrease in the demand
of
Suggestion
for
fuel
as a result
of high price would lead to the minimization of natural resources exploitation which reduce the problem of waste disposal in
such
industries.
Lastly
, as the cost of using
fuel
is higher, people might use them much more efficient.
For example
, if gas prices are higher, Europeans will learn how to cope with the cold and only turn on the heater when necessary.
However
, I would argue that there are much better methods to deal with environmental problems. The
first
solution us that government should spend more money on conducting research and developing technology to use renewable energy
resources including
Accept comma addition
resources, including
wind, solar and tidal energy
instead
of natural resources. By doing
this
, people can reduce energetic burden on nature. The
second
solution is to have stricter punishments for environmental criminals.
For example
, people who
has been accused
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have been accused
of environmental degradation should be required to pay a huge fine or receive a prison sentence.
This
makes individuals more likely to respect the law, and environmental issues can be limited.
Additionally
, the government should launch programs or run advertising campaigns to raise people awareness about conserving nature. In conclusion, I believe apart from increasing the price of
fuel
, there are more effective ways to protect the environment.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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Example:

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