The chart below shows that total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows that total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart shows the UK telephone calls, by call type category. These call types are local fixed line, national and international fixed line, and all calls in mobiles. The chart shows the total number of
minutes
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in
billions
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from 1995-2002.
Firstly
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, the local fixed channel illustrates a bell shape figure from 1995-2002. Telephone calls using
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field are 71
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in
billions
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in 1995 which increases until it reached 90
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in 1999 and decreases until it becomes 71
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again in 2002.
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, people who
uses
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national and international, illustrate an increasing straight channel as the years pass by. To demonstrate, it is 38
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in 1995 and increase to 61
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by 2002.
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but not the least, people who use mobile calls illustrate an increasing U-shape. It was dramatically lower in 1995 which only have 3
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of calls, converted in the
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. As the world is changing because of the power of new technology, it gradually becomes high in 2002 with 45
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in the
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.
Therefore
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, I conclude that there's a tendency that local fixed
channel
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channels
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will continue decreasing because more people are switching to mobile phones.
On the other hand
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, calls from international and national increase
a
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constant number every year like 1-3
minutes
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.
To sum up
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, all telephone lines except
local
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the local
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fixed line increased.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words minutes, billions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number of minutes
  • telephone calls
  • categories
  • local – fixed line
  • national and international – fixed line
  • mobiles
  • general trend
  • yearly totals
  • significant changes
  • milestones
  • data
  • rise significantly
  • decline
  • steady increase
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • exponential growth
  • over the period
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