Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

Each festival has its own i

mprotant

of great significance or value

important

belief and value. Nowadays, people are focusing more towards their enjoyment rather than u

ndestanding

the cognitive condition of someone who understands

understanding

a

ctual importance

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the actual importance

of that tradition.

This

essay will argue that people are still k

nows

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known

about their religious and they always try to perform according to older culture.

Firstly

, there are many different cultural e

vent

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events

h

appens

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happening

in all p

art

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parts

of the c

ountires

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country

countries

counties

and each has their own authenticity. But, t

heir

in or at that place

there

might be some changes has o

ccured

come to pass

occurred

over the time and b

eacuse

for the reason that; on account of

because

of that people might celebrate in different ways which does not mean that they does not know about p

articular activity.

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a particular activity

particular activities

the particular activity

For an instance, in India people use to celebrate h

oli

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Holi

hole

with natural c

oloures

a flag that shows its nationality

colours

calories

collars

and now they have include some new activities in it to create more fun.

However

, people still k

nows

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know

the reason behind celebrating h

oli.

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Holi

Finding more happiness while celebrating particular festive does not mean they does not aware of s

ignificance.

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the significance

Furthermore

, adding more exciting activities to older culture can

also

help n

ew generation

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the new generation

to keep their interest in it. In past years, many facilities were not a

vailable but

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available, but

now everything is easily accessible and growing population only search for happiness and excitement.

In addition

, people are very busy in their day to day l

ife but

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life, but

when any events c

omes

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come

in the year like New year celebration, they always get t

ogther

in contact with each other or in proximity

together

to make m

ost

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the most

out of it. To conclude, people understand their religion and they always try to take it forward in upcoming days. I totally disagree with a

rguement

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the argument

argument

that people are forgetting the significant value of their tradition.