The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Using cars as a mean of transportation is becoming increasingly popular all around the world. It is widely believed that other modes of transportation need to be promoted and international and global laws and rules should be imposed to take a control over owning and utilizing the cars. I strongly agree with that statement by considering the harmful effects that have been occurred due to

rising number

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the rising number

of private cars.

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,

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essay will discuss the potential negative impacts that have been caused due to cars and the way how above said measure can be tackled

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problem.

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with, an elevating amount of cars

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on

the road could lead to pose a threat to the environment in many ways. One of the glaring issues is carbon emission due to fuel burning. There is a positive correlation between

number

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the number

of cars and

amount

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the amount

of carbon particles in the surrounding.

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, it produces the vast amount of greenhouse gases, which ultimately raise the global temperature.

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, all the human beings and animals in the world has been suffering from high temperature in various ways,

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as

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, volcanic eruption and sea level rise. Apart from the environmental problem, at present

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,

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the health

of the people markedly deteriorates because of the poor air quality.

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enormously puts the burden to the government for investing huge amounts of money into

health sector

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the health sector

in order to meet the people’s needs,

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leading less

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leading to less

investment into the country’s economic sector. Having said that,

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above suggested new measure is one of the best ways to control the negative effects associated with the car usage.

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, if the public transport is well developed and

accomadate

be agreeable or acceptable to

accommodate

accommodates

accommodated

the needs of people,

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they would choose to commute through the buses or trains

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of cars,

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would decline the number of cars

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on

the roads.

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, international laws

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,

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as imposing heavy taxes, should be introduced to reduce

purchasing

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the purchasing

of cars as well as its usage.

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, fuel price needs to be increased globally in order to prevent the people from using cars unnecessarily. On the whole,

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this

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these

two notions would able to control the private

cars

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car

usage to a certain extent. In conclusion, while it is certainly true that cars are one of the necessities for people who are living in

today

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today's

todays

world, it is inevitable that it should be controlled given consideration to the damages it has been causing.

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, I strongly agree that

above

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the above

said measures should be taken to effectively tackle

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problem.