Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films needs to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In recent times, many people argue that, since the handheld devices can be used to watch films,
Cinema
can be avoided.
However
, there is another school of thought, which says that films must be enjoyed in
cinema
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the cinema
. Now,
this
essay would discuss both the arguments and would conclude by giving my point of view. Going to
cinema
Suggestion
the cinema
, buying popcorn and enjoying a movie, sound more like day dreaming, isn’t it? Well, in today’s time where the most expensive commodity is time,
no
in the historical present; at this point in the narration of a series of past events
now
would dare to spend it on a fantasy. Nor does anyone have
patience
Suggestion
the patience
to sit in
dark hall
Suggestion
the dark hall
a dark hall
dark halls
for 2-3hours. To substantiate
this
with an example, I watch all the recent movies through various streaming applications while I am travelling to
office
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the office
an office
, where I can pause a
film
, which cannot happen in
cinema
Suggestion
the cinema
. Imagine a
film
, full of special effects, amazing sound and out of the world
screen play
a script for a film including dialogue and descriptions of characters and sets
screenplay
,
that is
a
film
which can be a visual delight, would it not be
injustice
Suggestion
an injustice
to those who have been part of
this
cinematic beauty? Well, if your answer is yes,
than
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
, you must like watching
moves
a form of entertainment that enacts a story by sound and a sequence of images giving the illusion of continuous movement
movies
in
cinema
, as they cater to overpower all our senses and provide an immersive experience of a
film
.
For example
, to watch movie like, “the lord of the rings”, on
phone
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the phone
a phone
would be nothing short of
crime
Suggestion
criminal
. Now considering both the
point
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points
of view, I would conclude by stating my opinion. I feel that films are made with lot of
headwork
vertical space available to allow easy passage under something
headway
but in the end they are made with
motto
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a motto
of entertainment and for me entertainment is linked
with
Suggestion
to
relaxation, which can come when I have
comfort
Suggestion
the comfort
of usual
surrounding
the environmental condition
surroundings
.
Hence
, in my opinion, due to paucity of time and convenience, I would always recommend watching
movie
Suggestion
a movie
the movie
movies
on a phone or a tablet.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Mobile Viewing
  • Cost-efficient
  • Time-efficient
  • Personalized experience
  • Immersive
  • Cinematic experience
  • Surround sound
  • Collective experience
  • Technical superiority
  • Sensory experience
  • Social hubs
  • Cultural events
  • Distractions
  • Preservation
  • Filmmaking art
  • Cinematographic nuances
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