The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

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The chart examines the levels of donation among people of different ages in Britain.

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, a greater percentage of British people gave money to charity in 1990 than in 2010.

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, across the two years, the pattern differs before and after the age of 50. In 1990, 42% of the 36-50

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made charitable donations, and

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figure is the highest on the chart. The 18-25s contributed the least at only 17%. By 2010, these figures had fallen significantly to 35% and 7% respectively. The level of donations from the 26-35

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experienced a decrease in 2010 from 31% to 24%.

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donations up to the age of 50 declined across the two years, they rose among the 51-65

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from 35% to nearly 40, which was the highest percentage for 2010. The figure for the over 65s was lower than

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, at 35%, but it was still a little higher than the 1990 figure of 32%.

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The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

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In the past, people stored knowledge in books. Nowadays, people store knowledge on the internet. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctors. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?