Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and practice them with basic assistance, such as food and housing.To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It
is often argue
that Suggestion
is often argued
often argues
rich
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rich nations
a rich nation
nation
should offer basic amenities to those people who are homeless :
food and shelter. I strongly agree with Accept space
:
this
view point
because a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoint
this
approach allow
those people to spend a better lifestyle and on the flip side it support to wealthy Suggestion
allows
nation
to strengthen their labour.
To initiate with the foremost factor is this
it would open the gate for refugee people to live a better live
. To explain Suggestion
life
this
, a rich nation
would easily provide a basic amenities to these people without affecting their economy
level. Suggestion
economic
For instance
, a recent report of
'The Times' shows in an article that Germany Suggestion
on
spend
Suggestion
spends
noneless
more that 5% of their economy
to cater the daily requirements of syrian
refugees. Owing to of or relating to or characteristic of Syria or its people or culture
Syrian
this
approximately 2 million of people are spending a healthy and prosperous lives
.
On the other side the Suggestion
life
another
crucial benefits of not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
this
trend would be in favor
of the hosting promote over another
favour
nation
. This
is because, if a country allowing a n
number of people for settling down, Suggestion
a
an
then
they would provide an employment opportunities
to these people, in Suggestion
opportunity
this
way these nation
could become Suggestion
nations
strong
in Suggestion
stronger
there
skilled and non skilled manpower. of them or themselves
their
Moreover
, this
approach would also
bring some positive effect on counties
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the county's economy
county's economy
county economy
economy
. To illustrate this
, some western countries who are lacking to maintain their population due to certain reason, which can easily overcome their problem by providing basic stuff to these people.
To sum up, it is undoubtedly true that wealthy nation
are
well enough who can easily cater the refugees without affecting their Suggestion
is
economy
. Also
, they could boost their economy
as well by increasing the number of man power
.the force of workers available
manpower
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