Complain regarding housemate. Explain the condition any your openion on this topic

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Let me explain my situation, my new housemate is increasingly playing loud music throughout nigh and sleeping in day time. Even many times, talking on the phone for long hours and disturbing me. And frequent visits of his friends making the situation worse. Due to the disturbance I am not getting sound sleep

thus

, not able to focus on studies. I am worried, if

this

scenario will continue, what will happen to my academic grades. Would you kindly transfer me to some other room or change my roommate. I have no problem with

living

the act of departing

leaving

a person who is quieter and considerable for others. Even if single accomodation is provided to me, it will be a great favour to me. Thank you for considering my request.

Your's

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Piedmont

Faithfully Padminee Chauhan

Submitted by pchauhan3389 on Sat Feb 01 2020

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

129 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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