1. What is the main reason for your application for the programme? In what way do you believe you are going to benefit from it? In what way do you believe you will be able to contribute to the programme?

Ever since I attended the
first
banking visit during my studies for internship basis, I have nurtured a dream of a part of the top-level management team of a firm. Through the advancement in technology has been able to make great gains in areas – including in the capacity to expand commence and business. Since the advent of major trading routes that spanned different countries, the establishment of trade has helped to bolster the economic strengths of a variety of nations, and continues to do so to
this
dat
time for Earth to make a complete rotation on its axis
day
date
. With the internet spurring a new type of trade, technology is now connecting businesses to consumers in new ways. It is my goal to be able to better understand these types of connections in order to help streamline businesses in
future
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the future
, and I know that will give me the training I need to pursue my dream. Having 10 years of relevant experience in the field of accounting and finance in the yarn and education sectors, the power of
knowledge
seems to call me out pursuing me to seek more. The dream I nurtured during my graduation has grown with me and to make
this
reality I
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reality, I
intend to pursue Masters in Entrepreneurship, sustainability and social change at your esteemed university. In Pakistan, I have joined one of the top textile industry named as Al-Burhan
elastomeric
to attain global
knowledge
as
this
company was mainly working with International clients. I made interaction with the clients by emailing the invoices and vouchers
to
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for
them. The company trained me global procurement and granted me
promotion
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a promotion
as
finance executive
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a finance executive
which I consider as
major influence
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a major influence
on me for getting
knowledge
in
this
specific degree. Currently I strive to enhance my
knowledge
and motivation skills. I know these are important attributes for leaders in the company. I am excited to start taking small roles of leadership in the projects and day-to-day aspect of the business if I do get admission and after completing the subject. I think it is important for employees at any level
to have
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have
leadership skills. These skills give people the confidence needed to help innovate and improve the business. Overall, I consider myself to be a hardworking, determined student who is motivated by challenges and can gain personal benefit from new experiences. I strongly feel that a university degree in entrepreneurship will be a great foundation from which to launch a successful career in the future, in whatever field that may be.

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