In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Salaries vary from person to person based on the type of occupations they do.
some
people earn high Salaries where as some earn low Suggestion
Some
salaries but
in most of the countries only a small number of people
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salaries, but
earn
extremely high salaries.Suggestion
Earn
few
people Suggestion
Few
belive
that accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
believes
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country but
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country, but
dont
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are not fair enough as Salaries earned by a person is the fruit of his/her own hard Suggestion
Statements
work
.
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,
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,
country
is made by Use synonyms
community
of social beings Suggestion
a community
the community
in other
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Suggestion
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country
is nothing but "people".Restricting high salaries to Use synonyms
only small scale
of people will definitely Suggestion
the only small scale
doesnot
do any good to the Suggestion
do not
does not
country
.Use synonyms
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instance, if
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the same way for a Suggestion
In
country
to be in good shape every Use synonyms
peroson
living in there should be equally happy.a human being
person
unlike
only some people earning high salaries and most of the beings going through poverty will not help Suggestion
Unlike
countries economy
to grow.Government must take measures like collecting Suggestion
the country's economy
country's economy
tax
from people who earn over Suggestion
taxes
certain limit
and Suggestion
a certain limit
also
should make sure to eradicate poverty by providing employment to everyone in the Linking Words
country
to grow in Use synonyms
economy
.
Salaries depend on the hard Suggestion
an economy
the economy
work
and talent of peopleUse synonyms
,
limiting it to only certain level is not a good opinion in my thinking.It effects sense of responsibility and respect which in turn Accept space
,
effects
the productivity.People have an effect upon
affects
work
hard depending on the pay they getUse synonyms
,
in other way if it is limited Accept space
,
then
everyone feels disrespected and will stop giving Linking Words
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,
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,
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can lowers Linking Words
sense
of challenging nature in every one Suggestion
the sense
then
they start to lose Linking Words
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.All of us feels satisfied when we Use synonyms
are paid
enough for the Suggestion
pay
work
we have done and try to strive more with the time being but Use synonyms
doesnot
want to settle at a point.
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does not
Finally
.Linking Words
Nither
Restricting Salaries to certain level nor allowing Suggestion
Neither
small number
of people to earn extremely high salaries will not help any Suggestion
a small number
countries
economy to grow.Suggestion
country's
every
being has right to choose and right to feel satisfied.Any boundaries Suggestion
Every
effecting
these rights in turn arousing affect
affecting
effect
the well-being of the the conscious subjective aspect of feeling or emotion
affect
country
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