Stress related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are causes of this? What solutions do you suggest?

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In today's world,

stress

is one of the most common causes attributed to illnesses.

This

essay

will discuss the two important causes, mainly long working hours and an unhealthy

lifestyle

This

essay

will

also

mention about the possible solutions to the above problems. In

this

increasing advanced and competitive world, people tend to overdo themselves in order to, prove their competencies and capabilities. They are working increasingly long hours.

This

stress

has

also

lead to people

second

prioritizing their physical fitness, diet and sleep.

For example

, a recent study in one of the most technologically progressive country, Japan,

also

famous for it's overtime

work

culture showed that every

year there

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year, there

is a five percent rise in the number of

stress

related illnesses

such

as depression and stroke. So in the thirst for success, people are working overtime and in

turn ignoring

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turn, ignoring

their physical and mental well being. The two important solutions to help alleviate the above mentioned problems are maintaining a good

work

life balance and self awareness about one's health. People need to realize that living mostly for success will

furthur

to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)

further

compromise their body and mind and they need to find an appropriate balance between their

work

and life. It is

also

imperative to be aware of a healthy

lifestyle

by eating a good diet, exercising regularly and sleeping on time.

For example

, a recent study in Norway showed that people who worked four days per week displayed

more productivity

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more productive

than people who worked six days per week and were

more happier

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happiest

happier

more happy

in their family lives. In conclusion,

stress

has become a major concern, leading to several illnesses.

This

essay

discussed how

stress

is caused

as a result

of long working hours and unhealthy

lifestyle

This

essay

also

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

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Topic Vocabulary:

technological advancements
constant connectivity
job demands
work-related stress
societal pressure
achieve success
erosion
work-life balance
exposure
negative news
social media comparisons
chronic stress
mental health support
stigma
flexible work hours
stress management techniques
mindfulness
access to mental health services
community support systems
emotional support

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Stress related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are causes of this? What solutions do you suggest?

Your opinion

Nowadays, some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experience or personal qualities when they look for new employees. Why is this a case? To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Parents often give children everything they ask for and let them do what they like. Is it good for children what are the consequences when they grow up

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Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?