not a good idea and shoud be banned. while others are of opine that the vital scientific innovation can be possible from animal experiments. This will discuss both sides of the argument and will give a plausible conclusion

Experimenting on animals has become a burning issue in recent times. Some individual think that all experiments on animals is not a good idea and
shoud
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
be banned.
while
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While
others are of
opine
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opinion
that the
vital
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Vital
scientific innovation can be possible from animal experiments.
This
will discuss both sides of the argument and will give a plausible conclusion.
To begin
with, some school of thought believes that the
practicals
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practice
practical
made on animals is bad and should be restricted. These people have reasons because it might create life-cycle imbalance among
wild-life
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Wildlife
Wild-life
species
and have a chance of extinction.
This
not affects
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didn't affect
doesn't affect
isn't affecting
animals but
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animals, but
also
to the humans.
For instance
, many dragon flies in Africa are hunted, trying to make medicine out of it. The insects, which is the primary source of food for flies destroyed the human crops. If one of the
species
in
life-cycle chain
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the life - cycle chain
is disturbed, it can affect all the others too.
Therefore
, these persons believe that
this
should be banned.
On the other hand
, some
holds
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hold
the view of experiments on animals can bring scientific advancements.
This
is in fact true because the
practicals
(computer science) rules determining the format and transmission of data
protocols
can be made on
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
species
before
implementing
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Implementing
on real life scenarios.
For example
,
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,
many vaccines for deadly diseases are
initially
made
having finished or arrived at completion
done
on animals before applying
on
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to
humans.
Thus
,
Accept space
,
this
can have a positive impact on the innovation and research purposes. To conclude, some argue that experimenting on animals should be banned because of the repercussions on environment while
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
thinks that the innovations can be done for the advancements. Personally, I believe
this
can be justified for the animals whose population is more rather than implementing on
species
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the species
under danger of extinction.

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