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Some people think that having people from different nationalities and culture background to a country get a faster development. To what extend do you agree??

#people #nationalities #culture #background #country #development
In
this
 modern era,
peolpe
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
 are seen to live in different territories
from
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of
for
 their own
country
 to lead a better life, obtaining a variety of experiences and travelling purposes.
Therefore
, few individuals claim that in terms of rapid
growth development
Accept comma addition
growth, development
 of a
country
, it is more
nevessary
absolutely essential
necessary
 to have different
nationalities
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nationality
 people with various cultures and heritages.
However
, I completely disagree with
this
 idea and
thus
this
 essay will unveil why
this
stront
having strength or power greater than average or expected
strong
poin
a symptom of some physical hurt or disorder
pain
point
pink
 is
nt
negation of a word or group of words
not
 effective for a
country
. To commence with, we live in a place where people can communicate with others
spontaniously
in a spontaneous manner
spontaneously
. That entails a tendency of migrating people from
country
 to another
country
 and it would be a negative impact for a hosting
country
.
Firstly
, it can be hampered of
this
country
's improvement like more population problem,
dificiency
the state of needing something that is absent or unavailable
deficiency
 of food
resourse
available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resources
 to name but a few.
Secondly
, people who live in other countries may do offensive activities that
creat
make or cause to be or to become
create
creates
 a disorder situation of
hosting
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the hosting country
country
.
In other words
, those who immigrant their life
to
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in
 other countries are considered as
burden
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a burden
burdens
the burden
 that resulting many
typea
a subdivision of a particular kind of thing
types
type
 of
loodholes
an ambiguity (especially one in the text of a law or contract) that makes it possible to evade a difficulty or obligation
loopholes
such
 as low quality work experience, uneducated and so on. As
consequence
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a consequence
, the inundation of overseas populace can be a curse of a
country
. Apart from
this
, mixing with other cultures could be a critical problem.
Moreover
, both foreign people and
endemc
of or relating to a disease (or anything resembling a disease) constantly present to greater or lesser extent in a particular locality
endemic
 people can be affected by
this
 scheme of diversification. To recapitulate, in my opinion, I strongly disagree with that view and I would suggest in order to
faster
providing or receiving nurture or parental care though not related by blood or legal ties
foster
 development
to
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of
in
 a
country
, incumbents should encourage people to be more
skillfull
having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude
skilful
 and hard working to reach
robust economic status
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a robust economic status
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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