May people try to look younger than their age. What are the reasons people do this. Do you think this is a good thing or bad thing

Age is one of the most contributing factor in individual life. There are many people does a different kind of makeover which can help them to look
more younger
Suggestion
younger
than their actual maturity. There are mainly two reasons, one is they want to look fit and beautiful front of the others and the
second
is that to stay strong in
this
competitive world. According to me there is nothing wrong to look more active. There are many adults who are in their mid 40 or 50, they always want to look more attractive like younger generation. Because, nowadays there are so many types of cosmetic products are available in the market, which attracts the adults and give them a promise of better results.
However
, these all can help them to look more
perefect
being complete of its kind and without defect or blemish
perfect
according to their age because certain products help them to reduce wrinkles and make their skin more tighten.
For instance
, In the market the brand name Loreal sells the night cream, which can
reduces
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reduce
face wrinkles by using 7
day
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days
. Company's profit increased up to 50% in coming years because of
this
product. Ultimately, people try all random things to just look younger. Another reason, there is so much competition is going on especially in Bollywood industries where all the old actress use their
effeorts
earnest and conscientious activity intended to do or accomplish something
efforts
to hide their age by doing cosmetic surgeries. Recent
advance
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advances
technology brightens the skin tones as well as other helps to reduce weight.
As a result
, they get same fame and popularity like others.
For example
, famous actress recently
did skin
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did a skin
brightening treatment and become one of the highest paid celebrity in the world.
In addition
to
this
, if you want to be in your field and become more successful you need to look more energetic same like younger people. In my opinion,
number
Suggestion
the number
a number
of age is just factor which does not have any relation with your performance. In some countries, 60 year old people are more active than younger generations. So
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe
instead
of going into adulthood, we can become stronger physically and mentally.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Legal age
  • Marriage
  • Maturity
  • Stability
  • Individual choice
  • Freedom
  • Cultural practices
  • Religious practices
  • Education
  • Career aspirations
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