The graph below shows how elderly people in the United States spent their free time between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 23.17
This
line graph illustrates information about how seniors in the United States are using their spare time in
the Change preposition
from
year
1980 till
2010.
Change preposition
to
Overall
, it can be seen that reading, hiking, watching tv and surfing the internet experienced an increase in their numbers, while
theatre considered a downward trend in their rate.
In the 1980's
, hiking started Fix apostrophe usage
1980s
with
20%. Change preposition
at
This
sharply rose up to a peak of 80% in the final year
, which contributed to be
the most popular activity in Change the verb form
being
2010's
. Fix apostrophe usage
2010s
Furthermore
, reading comprises 30% of the activities in 1980. This
was 30 percent
lower than watching tv. Both of the enterprises showed fluctuation in their rate and increase to 60% and 65% in the final Change the spelling
per cent
year
. At
the beginning, surfing the internet contributed 5% of the numbers. Change the preposition
In
This
showed a
growth Remove the article
apply
to
15% in the Change preposition
of
year
2000. In 2010, it increased to a percentage of 50.
Theatre started with 50%, which was the second
significant project of the elderly people. In ten years, it dropped down to 30%. In the final year
it experienced an increase of 45%, which remained the least favoured hobby.Add a comma
,year
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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