In many western countries there is an increasing number of couples chosing to have no children.What are the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children.

In today's modern world world
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,
in many countries couples have to decide that they will
born
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bear
babies and
this
trend have become more common in many countries. There are some reasons behind
this
matter.
First
of all
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a huge number of people say that it's
is
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been
good
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a good decision
decision
because of nowadays the inflation rate has been increased
at
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in
large scale in many countries so
hence
of that people have been taking biggest decisions. They say
,
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,
we
can not
can not
cannot
give to mainly amenities to their children.
Besides
,
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they happy that
on
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in
their
decision
. From my perspective
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,
this
decision
have kept
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has kept
lots of disadvantages rather
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
advantages.
For instance
, whose couples decided
this
they will face lots of problems in every stage of lives. The children are mainly a part of
life
and without
children our lives
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children in our lives
children, our lives
will be dull and boring
therefore
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
biggest reality of
life
.
Furthermore
, no one can not alive without
this
bless
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blessing
blesses
.
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.
In addition
, Allah
give
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gives
to all
people lots
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people, lots
of happiness through children and we
also
enjoye
derive or receive pleasure from; get enjoyment from; take pleasure in
enjoy
enjoyed
from the heart
.
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.
similarly
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Similarly
, if people having stable on their
determin
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determined, then
determined then
then
the colours of
world
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the world
will be finish gradually due to all happiness with children. Apart of that
,
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,
when those people get
oldest
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older
old
they will face lots difficulties go towards ahead because
of its a fact
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its a fact
of
life
that no one
such
care which just can do our real children. To summarise, without
children their
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children, their
life
will be dull and colours less and
this
decision
will give to them lots of disadvantages to them.

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