In the past lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. Do the advantages of this new approach outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the past in order to write a research paper or a report, physical presence was necessary to attend the lecture and being tangibly present in the libraries for research.

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was on the one teacher to teach a certain subject. With the evolution of

technology flexibility

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technology, flexibility

for a more various age group who could not previously attend

schools

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school

as they had children and elderly to take care of are able to learn

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using a combination of online classes, in class participation through video resource including working parents or parents with children are able to In conclusion modern methods of using technology

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education

has revolutionized

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have revolutionized

the access of information, giving students flexibility which the traditional methods lacked.

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the advantages far

out weighing

be heavier than

outweighing

the disadvantages.

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In the past lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. Do the advantages of this new approach outweigh the disadvantages?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people think that government should spend money on the search for life on other planets, while others believe that is a waste of public money because there are still many problems on earth

It is better if an extended family for example uncle aunt grandparents are involved in a child upbringing than just parent alone. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Write about the following topic: Some people think that we learn best through in-person interaction with a teacher in a classroom. Others believe that online learning is more effective. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.