The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target, and the number of complaints and passengers.

The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target, and the number of complaints and passengers.
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The first chart shows the actual and
target
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percentage of
buses
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, from a particular bus company, that arrived at the destination on
time
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, between 1999 and 2003. Meanwhile, the
second
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chart shows how many complaints were made during the same period.
It is clear that
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while
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the expected
target
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of
buses
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arriving on
time
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decreased over the years, there was no clear pattern in the percentage of
buses
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that actually arrived on
time
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.
Additionally
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, the number of complaints from their
passengers
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increased throughout the period. In 1999, the company’s
target
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of
buses
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arriving on
time
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stood at 86%, which was 1% higher than what was actually achieved.
Although
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the
target
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remained unchanged one year later, the percentage of on-
time
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arrivals dropped by nearly 3%. By 2003,
this
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company had reduced its
target
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of on-
time
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arrivals to just over 84%,
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the actual figure had witnessed considerable growth to about 85%. Starting at approximately 7% of total
passengers
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in 1999, the number of complaints made by
passengers
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rose significantly before experiencing a slight decline to just over 8% in 2001.
This
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figure
then
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grew considerably two years later, with about 12% of
passengers
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complaining in the
last
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year.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words target, buses, time, passengers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "considerable" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • punctuality
  • target versus actual performance
  • correlation
  • consistency
  • trends
  • passenger numbers
  • complaints
  • assessment
  • measures taken
  • impact
  • effectiveness
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