The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country.
The line chart illustrates
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reasons
which caused Correct article usage
the reasons
people
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decided
to Change the verb form
to decide
move
to the urban city of a specific country from 2000 to 2015.
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Overall
, the chart shows the Linking Words
number
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people
moving to the city Use synonyms
instead
of living in the countryside increasing each year. It can be said that Linking Words
people
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move
their places mainly for their work.
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According to
the line chart, employment was the most cardinal Linking Words
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reasons
for 15 years, between 2000 and 2015, sharply Fix the agreement mistake
reason
increase
from 60,000 in 2000 to approximately 85,000 in 2005. After that, it Wrong verb form
increasing
searched
a peak in 2010 with about 91,500, but after 5 years, the Verb problem
reached
reason
for moving to Use synonyms
this
city decreased in negligible numbers, to nearly 88,000. The second major Linking Words
reason
behind the search for jobs that Use synonyms
people
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move
to a country's capital is because of their studies. After 15 years, Use synonyms
this
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reason
increased to an astonishing Use synonyms
number
. With 3 distinct stages, the Use synonyms
number
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people
moving for educational Use synonyms
reasons
increased from about 23,000 to 48,000 between 2000 and 2005, Use synonyms
this
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number
of Use synonyms
people
increased to 5,000 from 2005 to 2010, and it rose dramatically to a maximum of 88,000 in 2015.
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two Linking Words
reasons
for Use synonyms
people
to Use synonyms
move
to the cities of a country were because of their family or friends or for adventures. Use synonyms
However
, these two Linking Words
reasons
account for a relatively low or almost negligible Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
people
compared to the two previously mentioned. The Use synonyms
number
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people
moving for family and friends accounted for approximately 22,000 in 2015, which is 7,000 bigger than the Use synonyms
reason
for the adventures in the same year.Use synonyms
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