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Public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free for people who use it. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

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Public
transportation
 is the backbone of every nation.
Therefore
, some people argue that it should be provided with no fees while others think that there should be certain charges on usage of
this
 facility. To start with, public
transportation
 plays key role in the development of the economy of every nation. While most of the people in developed countries drive their own vehicles, millions of people around the world rely on public
transportation
 for their day to day requirements. Tourist, workers and students usually prefer
this
 mode of
transportation
 because it is not only
cheaper but
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cheaper, but
also
 provides frequent timings with minimum waiting period.
Thus
,
many people have opinion
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many people have an opinion
 that
state
Suggestion
the state
States
states
a state
 should provide
this
service free so
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free service so
 that more and more people can access it. Free
transportation
 helps individual to cut down travelling cost which is really helpful to poor and middle class people. On the other side, some people believe that humans will definitely misuse public transport if
government
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the government
 offers
this
 service with no cost. People will not respect it and most of them underestimate the value of the public
transportation
. It may
possible
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possibly
 that we will find overcrowded trains and buses in which many people are travelling with no purpose.
As a result
, other seekers may not get access of
such
 facility when they require.
Moreover
, it is not at all easy for any
state
 to provide basic facilities in buses and trains without charging reasonable fee from the users. To make
this
 service better, effective and enjoyable every
state
require
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requires
fund which
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fund, which
 can be invested to improve hospitality. In my opinion,
government
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the government
governments
 should implement proper methodology to regulate the prices of public transport.
Furthermore
, there should be different sections with different price range from lower to higher which can be selected by
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
 according to their needs. For frequent users, poor and handicapped persons,
state
Suggestion
the state
states
 should avail
this
 facility with no cost or with
nominal fee
Suggestion
a nominal fee
. In a nutshell, public
transportation
 should be designed in
such
 a way that all people can avail it in their budget with reasonable facilities.
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