Public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free for people who use it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s world, the
number
of private car users
increase
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increases
, continuously. Many people have shifted to using their privates’ cars and ignore the public
transportation
.
However
, some people assert that in order to attract the
number
of people to use the public
transportation
, the
government
should offer free
service
charges to all citizens.
On the other hand
, some
people
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person's
discharge with
this
policy. Both sides will be discussed, carefully.
To begin
with, it is certainly true that the free public transport
service
holds many advantages.
Firstly
,
this
policy definitely appeals all citizens to use the public
transportation
. The
number
of people will change to use more buses and subways rather than driving their private vehicles. Poor people will become more willing to take buses and subways without worrying about the price. With the accessibility to
this
service
, the
number
of private car drivers will significantly decrease.
Consequently
, it
also
has a great impact on the traffic and the environment. Without the large
number
of car drivers, traffic will become empty and do not crowed anymore. The total gas emission that release from all kinds of vehicles will be minimized,
as a result
the air pollution problems could alleviate, eventually.
On the other hand
, exempting public transport fares
also
have many drawbacks.
First
and foremost, it is an unpractical policy. The
government
has to cover an enormous expenditure, if the
government
provides free public
transportation
to all citizens. Many expensive costs for maintaining the public
transportation
service
such
as employee payment, electricity and a variety of vehicles require a large budget. If the
government
totally supports the public transport system, other areas
such
as
infrastructures or
Accept comma addition
infrastructures, or
medical services cannot be developed.
Moreover
, with the tones of passengers on buses and subways, the carriages would become dirty,
crowed
overfilled or compacted or concentrated
crowded
and uncomfortable. The quality of public
transportation
will be
downgrade
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downgraded
, eventually. In conclusion, the advantages of free bus/ subway fares contribute
to persuade
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to persuading
many passengers and protect the environment, whereas the downsides of
this
measure are an expensive expenditure and destructive the quality of the
service
. Personally, I do not agree with the free public
transportation
because buses and subways will become inconvenient for all passengers.
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