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The development o f tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

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Tourism has changed the world and increase the importance of the English as a single
language
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. Some people believe that English should be one
language
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 all over the world
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But others think it would diminish our culture.
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 essay will explain both pros and cons of having English as a single
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 in the world.
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, if we promote the English as a single
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then
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 communication between people of different countries become very strong. They can easily understand each others.
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, As china is very advanced country huge number of people go there for tourism, job and study, but problem for international people is communication.
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 is very hard for everybody to learn Chines
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, many students want to complete post graduation for UK
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Canada and Australia, but main problem they face is English
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 exams.
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 they have a good academic career
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but due to lack of English speaking environment they cannot speak English properly and it became very hard for them to get admission. Every coin has two sides, same in
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 situation there are some disadvantages of having English as a single
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. Primary, one universal
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 will diminish other local cultures of every country. Tourism will be affected because different languages represent its own cultures and people visited to these places to enjoy and learn those cultures.
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, It is very hard for old people to learn
Enlgish
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
. They are more concerned about
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
 own identity. In conclusion, English as a single communication way has very pros and cons it will affect different cultures and communities.
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 it is good for youth, students and working people
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but it has
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 some drawback.

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