Giving lectures in auditoriums to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching with the technology available today, there is no justification for it, and everything should be online. To what extent do you agree or disagree? give your own opinion

Education
is very important for a nation of successful country.
Government
Suggestion
The government
should introduce new policies and projects for
improvement
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the improvement
of
education
system
, but due to advance in
techonology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
and internet
facility many
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facility, many
perivate
confined to particular persons or groups or providing privacy
private
university
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universities
have introduced online
education
system
. Some people think that traditional and old method of teaching is
best
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the best way
way
for
education
, but some appose
this
way
of
aducation
the activities of educating or instructing; activities that impart knowledge or skill
education
. Both views have advantages and disadvantages. In
this
essay I will discuss both viewpoints.
To begin
with,
Education
is
necessory
absolutely essential
necessary
necessarily
for everyone
successfull
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
career. Students go to college and
university
not only for learning, but
also
for
personality
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personal
groming
activity leading to skilled behavior
grooming
.
For instance
, A teacher can teach what is good and bad things.
Secondly
, Attending lecture in any auditorium makes people punctual and regular.They meet other
collegues
an associate that one works with
colleagues
. In college and
unversity
the body of faculty and students at a university
university
presentation skill can be developed,
that is
very
helpfull
providing assistance or serving a useful function
helpful
in
creating communicating
Accept comma addition
creating, communicating
, leadership,
team work
cooperative work done by a team (especially when it is effective)
teamwork
skills in students. On
other hand
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the other hand
, online courses
is
Suggestion
are
another
way
for
education
, but is
improtant
of great significance or value
important
for those who cannot
reached
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reach
college and
university
easily.
For example
, if somebody who have not much financial resources to study abroad
then
he can do some short courses
availble
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
on
internet
Suggestion
the internet
but these courses are not much
worthfull
engaged in or accustomed to close observation
watchful
. In conclusion, both views have positive and negative advantages it depends on anybody resources
hain
obtain
gain
access to
university
. I believe that
traditional
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the traditional way
way
of
education
Suggestion
the education system
system
is most important for personality development
then
online
system
.
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