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These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Work life
for the
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for, the
 people have changed
alot
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a lot
 with time and it has
lead
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led
 to people migrating to other nations for job opportunities.
This
 has always raised a topic for debate that whether children benefit with
such
 movement or not. Some believe that it does help
children whereas
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children, whereas
 another group of thinkers support that it creates trouble for the kids.
However
, both
has
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have
 its pros and cons.
Therefore
, before commenting on my opinion,
this
 essay will cast light on both the views in the ensuing paragraphs. Undoubtedly, children could turn out lonely and
unempathetic
. When
family
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the family
a family
 moves out of their hometown to maintain their work life, kids miss out the love and care
from
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of
 their grandparents.
This
 eventually changes a kid’s behaviour.
Moreover
, they could
also
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
 contact with their culture and tradition which needs to be passed out to the
next
 generation by the older age group.
Nevertheless
, children receive various benefits from switching to different
nation
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nationalities
.
Firstly
, they have an opportunity for good education. Usually people move out
to
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of
 a metro city or a town to support their occupation, these places have good colleges and universities for anyone to
persue
carry out or participate in an activity; be involved in
pursue
peruse
parse
 a career of their choice.
Secondly
, cities offer good and effective transportation system which can help a child travel anywhere in the city without the help of parents leading him to grow
independent
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independently
.
Furthermore
, with these modernization children could meet various different people.
This
 could help them grow by learning new things about various people and culture.
This
 excites them to explore and build a curiosity to grow as an individual. In conclusion,
eventhough
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even though
 some thinkers
doesnot support
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do not support
does not support
 the idea of immigrating to
different country
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a different country
different countries
 for work. I believe that migration benefits the children, with the various facilities that
outstands
a person who is present and participates in a meeting
attendees
 from their native place.

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