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In some countries, the number of people who visit art galleries is declining . What are the reasons for this ? How we cand solve this problem

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Nowadays
,
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,
 the amount of people who attend
art
 galleries is dropping in some areas of the globe.
This
 essay will explore the causes associated and propose some measures which might
adress
the place where a person or organization can be found or communicated with
address
 them.
First
 of all, we should consider the crystal clear benefits of
art
.
Art
 is a way to express ideas and communicate concepts
.
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.
Also people
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Also, people
 can learn
from
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about
art
 and be inspired by it.
Moreover
,
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,
art
 encourages creativity and promotes harmony in society. On the hand, people are not interested anymore in
art
 while they were in the past. One of the reasons why their joy of attending museums
have dropped
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has dropped
 is because
,
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,
nowadays,
art
 and culture does not play a vital role in our society.
Art
 is
also
 considered a luxury and basic needs of less
priviliged
blessed with privileges
privileged
 people are being put before posh and exquisite things like
art
.
On the other hand
,
this
 problem should be mitigated if governments would subsidize the
entrace
something that provides access (to get in or get out)
entrance
 tickets to museums.
Moreover
,
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,
to tackle
this
 issue people should
prioritized
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prioritize
:
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:
art
 over education. Teachers should foster the interest in
art
 and encourage activities related to it.
Also
, the private sector of
economy
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the economy
 might be involved by capitalizing
art
 and workshop related to youngsters
.
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.
Also
,
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,
 there should be
open space exbition
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an open space exhibition
open space exhibition
 with free entrance
,
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,
 so the spirit of
art
 could be ignited. All in al
l
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,
,
this
 trend is not a piece of cake to solve i
t
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,
, people might have the patience to
carrefull
taking care or paying attention
carefully
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asse
evaluate or estimate the nature, quality, ability, extent, or significance of
assess
s the causes and to try to do their best in encouraging
youngester
a young person of either sex
youngsters
s to go to museums

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