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There are a number of different forms of communication and one such form is body language. In what way is body language a form of communication? What others ways do people communicate with each other?

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To most
people
,
language
 speaks for itself and the meaning of
language
 lies in the words and sounds itself.
However
, in my opinion, a
language
 goes beyond its literal meaning and delivers different messages as situations change/ Effective
communication
 relies not only on wording, pronunciation and sentence construction but
also
 on physical
gesture
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gestures
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 and facial expressions. It is undeniable that
body
language
 is a useful form of
communication
 in many circumstances/ The movements of the
body
also
 have a bearing on the forming of a
language
.
Besides
, there are other approaches to
communicate
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to
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with each other. Physical nonverbal
communication
, or
body
language
, includes facial expressions, eye contact,
body
 posture, gestures
such
 as a wave, pointed finger and the like,
overall
body
 movements, tone of voice, touch, and others. There are two cases in which
people
 mostly use
body
language
.
Firstly
, two
people
/ residents/ citizens from different countries must express their thoughts by moving parts of their
body
 in case of not
speaking
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 any mutual
language
. Obviously, movements of
body
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 play an integral part in transferring unspoken words and thoughts in mind to foreign partners without saying any words since these motions are as simple and understandable as possible.
Secondly
,
people
 with physical disabilities
such
 as
the
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deaf or mental disorders like autistic children have to use
body
language
 in daily
communication
 to convey messages and information that cannot be performed verbally. In schools for the disabled, a universal set of sign
language
 is developed to help not only incapacitated learners communicate
to
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 each other but
also
 normal
people
 understand them. That set is mainly exercised by
hands
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hand
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 and
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really a helpful tool in giving opinions, exchanging information, and even expressing feelings without any sounds.
Besides
body
language
, verbal and written
communications
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communication
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 are used daily. It is
the
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 fact that oral
communication
 is the most common form of
communication
 by which only human beings, among other species living on Earth, can exchange information with their counterparts. Each nation has its own
language
 but they may learn other foreign languages to
commune
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 when moving to other countries.
Last
 but not least, correspondences
such
 as letters, emails, transmittals, and facsimiles are making valuable contributions to
communication
 at work
as well as
 in daily

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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