In many places, new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe ing it is more important do protect the countryside and not build new homes there what is your opinion about this ?

In the modern world, countryside can be termed as the only source of fresh
air
. The urban areas do not have much
space
for plants, trees. The residences in the urban areas are small and are always crowded. Due to lack of
space
, there are less trees and
air
is polluted. Some people believe that we should protect our countryside and I strongly agree with the statement. In the rural areas, farms are the main source of income of farmers. They spend most of their time working on farms and planting crops. They work so hard to harvest the crops and because of that people in the urban areas can eat. Countryside not only provides fresh
air
, but
also
is the main source of food. Due to increase in population, we are out of residence
space
. It should be the responsibility of the government,
that
Suggestion
that's
where they can build new homes. Global warming is increasing globally and if our countryside is lost in building new homes, it will make the condition worse. We won't be able to breathe fresh
air
. The
air
quality index will go
more high
Suggestion
higher
. We will be pushed to one step closer to global extinction. The government should
demolished
Suggestion
demolish
old buildings and build new buildings. There are many compact designs of building where lots of people can live without taking up much
space
.

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