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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However at best these methods are ineffective, and at worse they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Medicine
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 "Clinical
medicine
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" redirects here. For the journal, see Clinical
Medicine
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 (journal).
Medicine
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 Marble statue of Asclephius on a pedestal, symbol of
medicine
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 in Western
medicine
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 Statue of Asclepius, the Greek god of
medicine
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, holding the symbolic Rod of Asclepius with its coiled serpent Specialist Medical
specialty
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Specialty
speciality
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Glossary, Glossary
 of
medicine
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Medicine
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 is the science and practice of establishing the diagnosis, prognosis, treatment, and prevention of disease.
Medicine
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 encompasses a variety of health care practices evolved to maintain and restore health by the prevention and treatment of illness. Contemporary
medicine
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 applies biomedical sciences, biomedical research, genetics, and medical technology to diagnose, treat, and prevent injury and disease, typically through pharmaceuticals or surgery, but
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 through therapies as diverse as psychotherapy, external splints and traction, medical devices, biologics, and ionizing radiation, amongst others. At some extent
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