The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Not so far ago nuclear power was introduced to the world.
Technology
of uranium enrichment gave to the world not only a lot of advantages,
such
as cheap
energy
or decreasing of coal factories CO2 emission, but
also
atomic bombs which took
huge amount
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a huge amount
huge amounts
of
lifes
record in a public office or in a court of law
files
. I agree with the statements, that the threat of nuclear weapons keep
world
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the world
in peace, and that
benefits
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the benefits
of nuclear technologies outweigh
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
disadvantages. But at the same time
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think that nuclear power
energy
extremely far from what we name environmental friendly.
For
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In
From
the beginning, after
Hirosima
a port city on the southwestern coast of Honshu in Japan; on August 6, 1945 Hiroshima was almost completely destroyed by the first atomic bomb dropped on a populated area
Hiroshima
accident, people began
think
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to think
thinking
a lot about consequences after using any kind of weapon, especially nuclear
one
. Some countries decided not to use it at all and destroyed their missiles.
That
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That's
all, show people's
fairs
an emotion experienced in anticipation of some specific pain or danger (usually accompanied by a desire to flee or fight)
fears
about
future
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the future
of the planet and
human kind
all of the living human inhabitants of the earth
humankind
. Diplomatic meetings became more restrained nowadays and number of the local conflicts decreased in the past 50 years.
Secondly
, talking about advantages of nuclear
technology it
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technology, it
can be named some, which eliminate all disadvantages. The
first
one
is the
energy
cost, it reduced drastically, comparing with the coal or oil
energy
. The
second
one
is the reducing of CO2 emission,
wich
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
help our planet stay alive and healthy. The
third
one
is because of the reactor size, we
cn
able to
can
use them in submarines, vehicles, no-
human
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humanitarian
projects,
such
as arctic research stations. All of
this
allow
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has allowed
us to call
this
technology
high perspective.
After all, couple
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After all, a couple
words about statement about cheap and clean
energy
. Of course, no
one
will argue that atomic
energy
is cheap.
However it's
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However, it's
totally not clean. Till today humanity doesn't
now
be cognizant or aware of a fact or a specific piece of information; possess knowledge or information about
know
any good ways to recycle atomic waste. It can be
putted
put into a certain place or abstract location
put
under the ground or in the depth of the sea, but
negative influence
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the negative influence
on all ecological systems will be great. After just a few decades of using only
this
technology
,
instead
of
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
, a lot of natural disasters can come. In conclusion, it should be underlined, that I support the idea that nuclear weapon help make people more peaceful and that
benefits
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the benefits
of nuclear
technology
eliminate it's disadvantages. But I don't support at all the
idea
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ideas
, that nuclear
energy
is clean.

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