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More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by modern life style which cannot be treated with modern medicine. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged. What extent do you agree?

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Modern technology has been increased along with the new
health
 problems. Many more people are getting suffered due to
health
 problems caused by modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern
medicine
. I agree with
this
 perception and I will explain my reasons in the following passage.
Firstly
, how much technology and medical sciences have been developed
also
 still there are some diseases which cannot be prevented and treated by modern
medicine
.
Therefore
, people are getting suffered due to various
health
 issues caused by modern lifestyle. Nowadays, every individual owning cars which makes them to travel happily to their workplace, but at the same time,
this
 increases air pollution in the society.
For example
, latest research in a country shows that there is a vast increase in the sales of their company car's in
last
 2 yrs and
also
 environmental research shows that there is a huge increase in the pollution. In these days, people totally avoided to have our ancestral tradition of having treatment for their problems. In olden days people used to have good food which results in good
health
.
Also
, they used many home remedies to cure their problem. People now should encourage themselves to get rewound to the olden traditional
medicine
. Indirectly, those ways will
also
 help one to get treated with the problems even which cannot be treated with the modern science and technology. After having considered all the points that I have discussed above, we can recapitulate that we should accept our olden methods and traditional treatments. So that we can find an appropriate treatment and
also
medicine
 for new issues.
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